Writing Tips

How To Get Published

Posted by on Mar 14, 2024 in Children's Literature, Editing, Writing Tips | 0 comments

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A friend of a friend asked for some publishing advice recently, and I put together a little something that I thought might help others as well. Here you go:

Most of the big publishers require an agent, so if you have a finished manuscript or a solid proposal for a longer work (usually that means a few sample chapters and a well-developed outline), you can start there. Editor Brooke Vitale has an excellent list of agents who take children’s and YA literature.

Smaller and local presses don’t always require an agent, so you can also can start there if you like. In Maine, Islandport and Downeast Books do books with Maine/New England themes.

When it comes to looking for editors, assistant editors and associate editors can be the best targets. They are still building a list of writers and illustrators. Full editors and senior editors often have well-established relationships with creative types and not as much room on their lists for new people.

One thing that can help is to go to bookstores and libraries and look for books that you like or that seem similar to what you’ve written and see who the publisher is. Do check pub dates, too, because it’s not that helpful to see what a publisher was putting out a decade ago….you want current stuff.

Maine Writers and Publishers Alliance and the Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators both have classes and workshops that can be helpful. And it can just be encouraging to get together with other people who are starting out and gather tips that way.

It’s a long slow process to get published! While you have one book out there looking for a home, continue working on new ideas and developing more manuscripts. It’s good for your mental health and for your career to have more than one (or two, or three) projects to show.

A friend of mine says, “It is the ground state of a manuscript to be rejected.” Most manuscripts are rejected most of the time. Prepare yourself, allow yourself to be sad for a few days when you get your first (second, third, seventeenth…) rejection, and keep going. Chocolate helps.


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Poets? Poet’s? Poets’?

Posted by on Feb 8, 2024 in Editing, Grammar, Writing Process, Writing Tips | 0 comments

So I gather there are some questions about Taylor Swift, poets, and apostrophes.

Should it be The Tortured Poet’s Department? That would be correct if there is only one tortured poet in residence. Perhaps it’s a very small college.

Should it be The Tortured Poets’ Department? That would be correct if there is more than one tortured poet present. A seminar, maybe.

Should it be The Tortured Poets Department, as on the album cover? This is quite correct also, just as long as there is, again, more than one tortured poet. In this case, instead of a department belonging to tortured poets, it’s a department of or pertaining to tortured poets–kind of like the housewares department is not a department that belongs to housewares, but a department where housewares are relevant.

(There’s an argument for The Tortured-Poets Department, but honestly, it just looks clunky and awkward.)

Should it be The Department of Tortured Poets so that we don’t have to have this conversation anymore? I vote for this. When in a total grammatical quandary, rephrase!

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Know What’s Next

Posted by on Mar 30, 2023 in Writing Process, Writing Tips | 0 comments

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Writing Tip for today: Never stop writing for the day at a spot where you don’t know what will happen next. This will leave you stranded the next morning, sitting at your desk and staring at your paper.

Always know at least what the next sentence will be. Preferably the next paragraph or two. By then your brain will hopefully understand what it’s supposed to be doing and supply paragraphs three, four, and so on.

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Don’t Dangle

Posted by on Oct 26, 2022 in Editing, Grammar, Writing Tips | 0 comments

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Will we ever know what became of all the mannequins?

An editor complimented me this week by saying I was the first author she had ever known to fix a dangling participle rather than introduce one. I’m proud.

A dangling participle sounds like some finicky grammar tidbit only a fusspot would worry about, but it’s actually quite simple. It’s all about getting a descriptive phrase (the participle) next to the noun it modifies. If it’s closer to a different noun, it “dangles”–i.e. it’s not securely attached to the right noun.

Like this:

The site of the infamous Mannequin Massacre, Algernon had always been fascinated by Lord Lingleberry’s Tower.

The participle (“the site of the infamous Mannequin Massacre”) appears to describe Algernon rather than Lord Lingleberry’s Tower. It dangles.

Algernon had always been fascinated by Lord Lingleberry’s Tower, the site of the infamous Mannequin Massacre.

Now the participle is securely next to the noun it describes. No more dangling.

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